BTS: Draft 2 finished!!

Oh I’m feeling good. After the trip to Melbourne and falling short of my goal of nine pages a day, I have finished draft 2 of the feature film.

draft 2

Now I’ll send it out to a few friends and get some much needed feedback. I found myself lapsing into vague descriptions for the third act because I’m counting on the location and cast really pulling that whole sequence together. There’s fighting and running and tricky camera work and I’m gonna need a huge collaboration effort there and I feel like writing it all down in detail would be pointless and presumptuous.

While it’s a sunny day, the conservatory where I’m writing is cold. I’m in my pink bathrobe, purple cotton pants I bought form Thailand when touristing around a temple ($2!) and my thick ugg boots Abby bought me for last year’s Christmas present.