BTS: Second draft begins
The first post on my Behind the Scenes page is about starting the second draft. How exciting!
My first draft was 84 pages. After meeting with two very talented writers, Kelly Kilgour and Steve Barr, and receiving a load of helpful feedback, I’ve began the plotting process of my second draft.
The second half of the second act is waffly and boring, that has been completely removed and re-beated from scratch. My character motivation is unbelievable for a good 20 pages so that has been rectified (I hope).
I’ve made the decision that I’ll write 9 pages a day for the 10 days I’m here and that’ll steer me in good steed.
After the second draft, I’m already excited for the third draft.
Wish me luck.
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